Call it like it is

A few recommended edits for a Wall Street Journal article:

Health Law Slow to Win Favor Opposed by Majority of Americans

The day after the president signed the bill into law, which happened exactly two years ago, an average of major polls collated by the website Real Clear Politics showed 50.4% of Americans opposed. This week, that had changed only by a tenth of a percentage point, ticking up to 50.5%., which means the health law has not gained any support.

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